![]() I‘ve written before about the elements of a great speech, and the elements of a great story. I’m not bad at writing either of these, but I’m terrible at delivery, so I’ve been trying to teach myself how to be a better presenter. This article is about what I’ve learned. Just to recap, here are the elements of a great speech:
And here are the elements of a great story (which is often an integral part of any great presentation):
This is all about developing high quality content — which is most of what ‘effective presentation’ courses are about. Of course you need to know your audience (and the space you’re speaking in and the tools you are using) and do your homework and know what you’re talking about, in order to craft content that will contain these elements and connect with your audience. But once you have the content down, the rest should be easy, right? Well, maybe if you have a photographic memory. What’s the process for making the delivery of the content powerful and effortless? Here’s what the experts say:
A great way to learn effective presentation, I’m told, is to start with something short and practice with that — a joke for example. Rehearse and deliver the joke to different audiences until it ‘works’ — you deliver it without hesitation or misstep, with the appropriate pauses for effect, and get the maximum audience reaction. By doing so you’ll find what works for you — how much you need to memorize and how much you can fill in yourself extemporaneously, without hesitation. Also, I’ve learned, unless audience interaction (questions etc.) is prohibited, you should have a ‘core’ presentation that takes no more than half the allotted time, some interesting and relevant ‘unforced’ questions to throw to the audience if they don’t volunteer questions of their own accord, and some additional material to present near (but not after) the end of your core presentation if you really can’t get the audience engaged, so that your presentation isn’t embarrassingly short. For a writer, memorization and rehearsal is a frustrating process — it may seem superfluous to have to learn what you’ve written, when it’s perfectly clear and engaging in written form. It’s especially challenging if, like me, you have a terrible memory. You have to think of it like the script of a play — if you’ve ever read a play or screenplay, you know it’s not at all the same thing as actually seeing it performed. And when you present you are a performer, not a writer, and the quality of your performance is every bit as important as the quality of the writing you are delivering — perhaps even more so. So now I know just enough about making presentations to be dangerous. I welcome your additional ideas and hints, and I’ll tell you how my next presentations work out. |
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Having done quite a bit of public speaking, including in competition, I’d say you have a great outline for success here. I would say that it’s much easier to make an impression on your audience – and have fun yourself — if you enjoy what you’re talking about and feel passionately about it; unfortunately, that can’t always be the case. Fortunately, my stints in improv have given me many joyful moments of being ‘up front’, and having a great time. Those moments have made me far more comfortable with the limelight than I ever was before.
Steve Job’s speech is a good example to study:http://www.wiredatom.com/jobs_stanford_speech/
Meg: I’m envious — improv is exactly what I need to help me think on my feet and wean myself off notes. Avi: Amazing speech, thanks.
Actor Anthony Hopkins says that he prepares for a movie by reading the script 100 times.